21 Apr 2008

Dresden




i feel like Dresden
smashed concrete and bricks
smoke on the rubble
rain in the pot holes.
the city is burning
broken bones and glass
flesh on the razorwire
blood in the teeth



3 comments:

Robert said...

whoa!

strikingly, vividly grim, CJ

TICTAC said...

elegant style and yet deeply visual and harrowing..

Robert said...

yeah, that's how ya paint pictures with words, innit?